the best interactive fiction game i ever played!, interesting storyline, sad and romantic at the same time! I hope that future updates will be more interesting and also released soon!
After the wedding, the game is repeatedly looping through asking Hawk questions and explaining the MC's pronouns. If other people haven't seen this loop, it's probably related to gender choice... so, if it's relevant, my MC is male but isn't sure that's quite right, and Hawk is male.
Should be all fixed now–thanks for letting me know! It shouldn’t break your saves, but if you’re still stuck in a loop after refreshing, try using an older save or restarting. If that doesn’t do it, please let me know!
You don't know how excited I am for this OH MY GOD.<3
This is amazing so far ! Beautifully written and all the characters have this unique and catching personality. I love Hawk, even if they are blunt they seem nice.
I... think the betrothed gender selection is bugged. I've gotten an F!betrothed every single time regardless of which option I select. I know it just says it's affected by my choice of preference, not determined by it, but... it doesn't appear to be affected by that choice at all.
Thanks for letting me know about this! Is the issue still popping up after the wedding ceremony is done? Before the ceremony, the MC’s family may make an incorrect assumption about the gender of the MC’s betrothed. I can add a note in-game to make that clearer!
But after the ceremony, their actual gender should reflect your earlier choices. If their gender is still showing incorrectly after their post-wedding chat, could you let me know what choices you made while picking your MC’s romantic/physical attraction so I can try and track down the bug? I haven’t been able to replicate it.
I totally see where the confusion came from–sorry about that! I made a quick update to the text to help anyone else who might be confused about the same thing!
I really loved it so far, Hawk seems like a decent person and he didn't harm or did anything bad to us xD and what was the creature on our closed door? werewolf? did it want to eat us? o.o I'm looking forward to read more of your story :D
I love the plot and how well-written the story is. Also, the smart-ass dialogue options for the MC are fun. I certainly chose them just for the sake of contrasting with Hawk's abrasive personality. The cliffhanger ending left me wanting for more.
I'm looking forward to how the story will progress.
This is really well-written and intriguing! I am so looking forward to any updates, as I very much enjoy the characters and story so far <3 If I can ask, would it be possible in the future for you to add a third option when asked if you feel physical attraction? Something like 'not usually, but maybe with the right person'? Or if I choose not to can I decide to change that later, but only specifically for Hawk? If not I totally understand and will enjoy it no less!
You’ll be able to make an exception for Hawk down the line, but adding a third option like that is definitely something I can do! Thanks for the suggestion!
That's good to know, thank you so much! I really like how inclusive the game is, whilst still being set it it's own universe with some societal 'rules' in place.
I’m glad you’re enjoying it so far! The new update includes a new option that should hopefully be a little more comfortable for grey/demi/other aspec MCs!
Just started it - very intrigued so far! But at the point in the story where the player gets the box with the letter it only shows you one option with how you can react but I suspect there should be more? Idk, the text on that page is pretty long and I can't scroll down either.
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the best interactive fiction game i ever played!, interesting storyline, sad and romantic at the same time! I hope that future updates will be more interesting and also released soon!
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Should be all fixed! Thanks for letting me know!
the story so far is amazing, and i love how you incorporated societal expectation into the choices ( such as gender norms and sexuality).
i just found a small problem where this appears when you choose the option "we are surprisingly close in height(6'5-6'11)" when meaning hawk
I’m glad you’re enjoying it so far, and thanks for the bug report! Should be all fixed now!
After the wedding, the game is repeatedly looping through asking Hawk questions and explaining the MC's pronouns. If other people haven't seen this loop, it's probably related to gender choice... so, if it's relevant, my MC is male but isn't sure that's quite right, and Hawk is male.
Should be all fixed now–thanks for letting me know! It shouldn’t break your saves, but if you’re still stuck in a loop after refreshing, try using an older save or restarting. If that doesn’t do it, please let me know!
You don't know how excited I am for this OH MY GOD.<3
This is amazing so far ! Beautifully written and all the characters have this unique and catching personality. I love Hawk, even if they are blunt they seem nice.
im so excited for this!!
I... think the betrothed gender selection is bugged. I've gotten an F!betrothed every single time regardless of which option I select. I know it just says it's affected by my choice of preference, not determined by it, but... it doesn't appear to be affected by that choice at all.
Thanks for letting me know about this! Is the issue still popping up after the wedding ceremony is done? Before the ceremony, the MC’s family may make an incorrect assumption about the gender of the MC’s betrothed. I can add a note in-game to make that clearer!
But after the ceremony, their actual gender should reflect your earlier choices. If their gender is still showing incorrectly after their post-wedding chat, could you let me know what choices you made while picking your MC’s romantic/physical attraction so I can try and track down the bug? I haven’t been able to replicate it.
Ohh I see. I was just confused by the family's assumptions. I kept restarting to try to fix it and never got past that point.
I totally see where the confusion came from–sorry about that! I made a quick update to the text to help anyone else who might be confused about the same thing!
I really loved it so far, Hawk seems like a decent person and he didn't harm or did anything bad to us xD and what was the creature on our closed door? werewolf? did it want to eat us? o.o I'm looking forward to read more of your story :D
I love the plot and how well-written the story is. Also, the smart-ass dialogue options for the MC are fun. I certainly chose them just for the sake of contrasting with Hawk's abrasive personality. The cliffhanger ending left me wanting for more.
I'm looking forward to how the story will progress.
This is really well-written and intriguing! I am so looking forward to any updates, as I very much enjoy the characters and story so far <3 If I can ask, would it be possible in the future for you to add a third option when asked if you feel physical attraction? Something like 'not usually, but maybe with the right person'? Or if I choose not to can I decide to change that later, but only specifically for Hawk? If not I totally understand and will enjoy it no less!
You’ll be able to make an exception for Hawk down the line, but adding a third option like that is definitely something I can do! Thanks for the suggestion!
That's good to know, thank you so much! I really like how inclusive the game is, whilst still being set it it's own universe with some societal 'rules' in place.
I’m glad you’re enjoying it so far! The new update includes a new option that should hopefully be a little more comfortable for grey/demi/other aspec MCs!
I can't seem to scroll at all and couldn't get off of the warnings page.
It should be updated to let you scroll now. Give the game a quick force refresh (ctrl+F5 on Windows) and see if that helps.
All good now 👍
Thank you for the reply!
Just started it - very intrigued so far! But at the point in the story where the player gets the box with the letter it only shows you one option with how you can react but I suspect there should be more? Idk, the text on that page is pretty long and I can't scroll down either.
Thanks for letting me know! You should be able to scroll and see the rest of the options now!