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I hope this is still being worked on. It's a really unique story and I'd love to read more. 


Edit: Found their Tumblr. It's still being worked on so I'm happy.  

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I hope there would be further update for this because it's so fascinating:3

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this is amazing!!!!! your writing and worldbuilding is so captivating and enchanting i was just sucked into it completely and lost all track of time. the descriptions, the dialogues, the choices - they were all so satisfying to read and experience!!! and i absolutely adore the characters, especially the siblings / in-laws, they're so?? they have so much depth as side characters and i love their interactions with the main character. it's so heartwarming T_T thank you for sharing such a wonderful story with us, i can't wait to see where this goes!!!

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This is great! Love the tone of this, it really feels like a fairy tale. I have a question about the male protagonist though, is there a reason he isn't obliged to serve in the army like Soren? Or has he already? Also how old is the protagonist supposed to be?

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Those are great questions! There isn’t currently a draft/forced conscription, but Soren felt compelled by the family’s military history to enlist. It’s his own sense of duty that made his enlistment inevitable rather than a legal requirement to do so. The protagonist doesn’t have a set age, but I usually consider them to be somewhere in their mid twenties to early thirties. A significantly older protagonist may need a little looser interpretation of canon, but anything early twenties and up could work if you squint!

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i love my husband hawks and i will stay be side him

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whos invitation will you acceptI WANT TO GO WITH MY WIFE

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Sophie Howl vibes (⁠ ⁠ꈍ⁠ᴗ⁠ꈍ⁠) the story is so cute, and the worldbuilding is great!

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This is really interesting! Tbh I really like the setting where elves didn't just live in mansion haha. I can't wait for future updates!

If I have some gripes, it's just that it can be pretty hard to see black letter with dark purple background and otherwise. I have to squint before I can find the start game button in the starting page... The layout is really beautiful though!

Thank you so much! And I do have some UI updates to improve the default theme’s readability that will go live with the next big update! (Though aside from the colors and a few tweaks, I can’t take credit for how nice the UI is–I used this template by Vahnya!)

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omg this is soooo good ??? the mc's siblings and in-laws are soooo endearing, and i love the ro's !!! i also really love the magic tower, it's so interesting, and i love the elf lore !!! definitely looking forward to more of this !!!!!

Oh my, just finished playing and it was amazing! I love where the story is going and I can't wait for updates! <3

After planning on playing through this current demo I finally got to it today and was absolutely not disappointed.

the story setting is fascinating in a world aware but cautious of magic, the mc is AMAZINGLY customized and suited for countless different needs and types, each character adds another realm to the story, and the interactions are incredibly varied.

all in all, I'll be patiently and happily waiting for further updates 

Super love this demo!!! It has a lot of potential and I'm excited to see how it goes :) 


[Bug notice]

This popped up whenever choosing husband or wife as a gender questioning character, chose wife in this case; it used spouse for a couple of pages and then switched to wife again later

Thank you for the bug report! Should all be fixed, but let me know if anything like this pops up again!

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